I think what you composed was actually very reasonable. However, think about
this, suppose you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your
content is not good, but what if you added a headline that makes
people want more? I mean
- is a little plain. You ought to peek
at
Yahoo's front page and see how they write post titles to
get people interested. You might try adding a video or a picture or two to
grab readers
interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it
would make your posts a little bit more interesting.
